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Wind by GeorgeHarrison Wind by GeorgeHarrison

- window -

somewhere in Camlica . . .

Thank you `mnoo for suggesting and `suzi9mm for choosing this as DD !

the other parts of this series :

HIDE [link]
RAIN [link]
STYLE [link]
SNOW [link]
RETRO WIND [link]

for

FROZEN
COLD
RECESS
REVERIE
LOVE
BREATH
EMPTINESS ,

see : '08 Calendar [link]
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Given 2005-09-01
Wind by ~GeorgeHarrison ( Suggested by mnoo and Featured by suzi9mm )
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I really enjoy this piece. It's a great example of minimalism that often isn't seen in deviations nowadays. A great capture of motion, and your decision to use Black and White really helped here with the contrast of light and dark.

My biggest issues would be the concept as a whole and just a few minor technical details. While it is done well by comparison to other pieces, I do find the idea of a "lone window against a stark wall" to be a little overdone at this point. One the whole, it works here because of the fluttering and tone choice, but there have been more original choices.

It also seems ever so slightly tilted. I can't tell if it's the way the window was built or not, but the top edge is definitely not parallel to the top of your frame. The bottom line isn't as harsh, so it's a little less noticeable. It by no means ruins the picture or anything, but it's there nonetheless. I'm also a little conflicted about the wall as a whole. The window itself has this great contrast with definite shadows and depth. However, it tends to make the wall completely flat by comparison. It's probably much richer in tone on a large print, but for internet viewing it's almost distracting.

Again, on the whole a wonderful piece that really stood out among the others when browsing that really only has some minor details that could be tweaked. Great job!
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Canankk Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Featured in my journal www.deviantart.com/journal/Mel… :iconarrheartplz:
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longtimedyin Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Nice colorz kardeş yüksek çözünürlüklüsü yok mu?
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FelisFather Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Simple, elegant.
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Em-S5 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
So simple! I love it!
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farcry77 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This shot made me say wow
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GeoLPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
great
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deepresonance Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well done!
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Einsilbig Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
What a wonderful shot!!! :love:
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crh Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
instant fav
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Nice photo -:)
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